Billy VW
12/11/2014 5:32pm
This video essay is really meaningful. You spoke about stuff that I would never think of and your video was great.
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Rob
12/14/2014 2:11pm
Although you were hesitant in the beginning about making a video essay you have no reason to be. You did a great job on this video and on the essay. I love the background music as well. Bravo!
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Boyd
12/16/2014 7:02pm
You spoke very clearly in this and it made it a lot easier understand. I agree that going to Walden Pond and debating it has made it more meaningful. Great job!
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Jack E
12/17/2014 8:37am
Your post was beautiful. The audio was crisp and you were straight to the point. The quote is a bit overused, but it does not matter, for it was a wonderful way to start the essay.
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Hal.
12/17/2014 10:06am
It was a great essay. The quote that you used was great and the theme was powerful, I think this is one of the best.
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